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Lying to the world as I lie to myself
I pull a small doll down from the shelf
The image of a girl with a china face
Looking so innocent, wrapped in lace

Gazing at this doll, I’m shocked to see
This vision of innocence looks just like me
The faint color of her face, as subtle as mine
And like this little china doll, I wear a dress so fine

Paint my lips with a rose red shade
Slowly I watch as reality fades
Paint my eyes with blue; stand up nice and tall
Tint my cheeks with pink, now I am this china doll

Twirl in the mirror as soft music plays
Suddenly my dress tears and frays
Another twirl as I fall to the ground
As I hit it, there’s a smashing sound

My frail body laying motionless on the floor
China pieces lying broken near the door
In my hands, the little china doll remains intact
The broken pieces are from my own face in fact
©2006-2009 ~SpriteOfFire
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eh, i got bored at religion one day and started writing this on my arm. and yes, i know it's sad, i'm aware.

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:iconmichaelthewolf:
Wow! i didn't know you wrote shit like this... Thats pretty fuckin' cool!

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Sink your teeth into the flesh of midnight! Night forever more!
"The Mars Volta" oh yeah
:iconspriteoffire:
lol why thank you, damn the writer's block tho, i miss my poetry! :giggle:

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the liver is evil and must be punished!
:iconmichaelthewolf:
O believe me i know how the writers block goes. It's taken me for ever to write just the 5-6 pages i have... and i mean forever. (like a month at least). But you know you just got to keep at it right?

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Sink your teeth into the flesh of midnight! Night forever more!
"The Mars Volta" oh yeah
:iconspriteoffire:
yup yup, i wrote china doll about a month or so ago. then i started another poem but can't finish it. i need new inspiration. i have to like totally rework my whole writing style almost or something like that lol. idk what i'm trying to say, i'm too tired to think straight lol. :giggle:

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the liver is evil and must be punished!
:iconmichaelthewolf:
Yeah me too... what is it like 1:30 shit. But yeah inspiration is always hard to find and when you do... It never seems to last. *Deep Breath* I don't even know anymore. Something that works for me... at least for a little while, is just force yourself to write. It will be crap... most likly anyways, but it will at least spark something in your mind. I'm actually really proud of what I've got so far and it started from me just forcing myself to write. Then i rewrote it at least 10 times until I had what i liked. IDK i guess what I'm saying is... Give it a try.

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Sink your teeth into the flesh of midnight! Night forever more!
"The Mars Volta" oh yeah
:iconspriteoffire:
well my main problem is i keep writing about the same things, i need something new to write about. but new ideas are hard to come across. at lease, they are now, i never used to have trouble writing. o well, time is a test of mind i guess. wtf, that made no sense with what i was saying lol.

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the liver is evil and must be punished!
:icondwoffles:
Oooh. Pretty.

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"Everyone has a secret world inside of them. All the people in the whole wide world. I mean everybody."
:iconspriteoffire:
thank you! for some reason i thought you had already commented on this one. probly cuz you have on like everything else lol. o well, i appreciate the love! ^_^

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the liver is evil and must be punished!
:icondwoffles:
Yay! ;3

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"Everyone has a secret world inside of them. All the people in the whole wide world. I mean everybody."

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